tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5955954018540213523.post7050280798902345036..comments2024-01-28T11:44:45.563-07:00Comments on Andrea Pearson Books: Needing Feedback on My AdAndreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05490759375036511747noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5955954018540213523.post-6970861859949939082010-07-18T07:52:56.170-07:002010-07-18T07:52:56.170-07:00I would beef up your 'hook' more; somethin...I would beef up your 'hook' more; something like this: "Violin, Viola, or Piano Lessons - Open your or your child's ears to the wonders of music, learn how to play compositions of great artists like Bach, Mozart, blah blah, and discover a new talent!" Make someone reading the ad a little more excited about what you have to offer before giving the details!Matthew Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04807259370334524792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5955954018540213523.post-47142848192002901642010-07-15T16:26:37.427-07:002010-07-15T16:26:37.427-07:00First response: I wonder if she lives close by.
...First response: I wonder if she lives close by. <br /><br />I'd sign my daughter up for piano. <br />Great ad! No changes. This is the best I've ever seen. Just saying. :)MTeacresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00381461599028233499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5955954018540213523.post-80922173916499422132010-07-15T15:36:20.528-07:002010-07-15T15:36:20.528-07:00I'd hire you! Especially love the picture - y...I'd hire you! Especially love the picture - you look clean cut, kind, and also like you have a sense of humour.Kimberly Vanderhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01653757517652257445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5955954018540213523.post-63137789203853362812010-07-15T12:30:26.634-07:002010-07-15T12:30:26.634-07:00What has worked the best for me is getting busines...What has worked the best for me is getting business cards or mini-flyers out to all the local music stores. My posters haven't generated much, if anything. With my cards, I direct them to my music website (saxmyax.com) where I put more detail and sound files. I also try out instruments at the various stores so that the employees there can hear me and think of me when someone asks them about lessons.<br /><br />Also, don't be afraid to post any degrees or certifications you have. People look at those things first.<br /><br />I feel for your situation. It's almost as hard to advertise music lessons as it is a book. Word-of-mouth still works best.Berin Stephenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10486436239157815097noreply@blogger.com